Haibun: Making Lemonade

a black and white family photograph featuring two women and a baby boy in a pram

Her eyes filled with mist when she spoke about Zeeland. I was too young to understand her stories. The feeling in my heart when we made lemonade was real and true. She let me add a little sugar to warm water, while continuing to stir with her spoon.

Zierikzee
the ring with the moonstone
still fits

Β© Xenia Tran

This haibun was inspired by a moment from my childhood when I visited my great-grandmother in Rustoord, the retirement home where she spent her final years. Zierikzee is a town in the province of Zeeland in The Netherlands.

The above poem is an interpretation in English of my haibun Rustoord, originally written in Dutch:

Rustoord

Haar ogen liepen vol met mist, als ze het over Zeeland had. Ik was te jong om haar geschiedenis te begrijpen. Het gevoel in mijn hart, als we samen citroenlimonade maakten, begreep ik wel. Ik mocht schepjes suiker aan het warme water toevoegen terwijl zij met een lepel bleef roeren.

Zierikzee
het ringetje met de maansteen
past nog steeds

Β© Xenia Tran

I am delighted that Rustoord was first published in Vuursteen, Tijdschrift voor haiku, senryu en tanka, Winter 2019, the quarterly journal of Haiku Kring Nederland. A very big thank you to Marian Poyck and colleagues for putting this edition together.

The header photograph is the only photograph I have that features my great-grandmother. It was taken in 1941 by my late grandfather and features my late great-grandmother, my late grandmother and my father in his pram.

Wishing you all a blessed Sunday,

with love from Xenia xxx

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52 thoughts on “Haibun: Making Lemonade”

    1. Thank you kindly dear Lois. We’ve kept it in a special frame with other family photographs and they are truly treasured πŸ™‚πŸ’œ xxx

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words dear Cathy, hope you are all having a wonderful weekend too πŸ€—πŸ’œπŸ• xxx

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words dear Laurie. It’s lovely to feel their presence, especially at this time of year πŸ’œ xxx

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words BjΓΆrn, I’m so glad you enjoyed this. Translating it into English was the hardest part ;o)

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        1. Thank you, my voice did change in English. I felt that a literal translation would need a longer explanation and remove too many of the internal echoes from the original idea.

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  1. That is a very special photograph, Xenia – I have a similar one somewhere in my collection. I love the brief but vivid description of making lemonade and the moonstone ring – I love moonstones – and I enjoyed reading the Dutch version. My Dutch is very basic as I didn’t spend as much time there as I did in Germany. One of my best friends is married to a Dutch artist – they live in Norwich.
    Congratulations on having your haibun published!

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words dear Kim and lovely to hear you have a similar photograph in your collection! Have you written a poem with that image? If not it may be a nice thing to do, just to see what happens. I am glad you enjoyed reading the Dutch version too xxx

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      1. I’ve written poems with other images, Xenia, but not that one. There is one I cherish, with my great grandparent and grandparents on my mother’s side, my parents and my (then) baby sister and me. Sadly my grandfather had just had a breakdown and looks terrible, and my grandmother and mother were both recovering from TB.

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        1. Thank you Kim, I can see why you treasure that photograph and it’s telling such a poignant story πŸ’œ xxx

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  2. I add my Congrats on your being published. At first I thought Zeeland meant Zealand; thanks for clearing that up. Just last year, through Ancestry.com I discovered my true heritage in Cambria, Italy. I’m thrilled to be Italian.

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words dear Glenn and how wonderful you’ve been able to trace your heritage to Cambria – that’s so exciting!

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words dear Linda, so lovely you enjoyed the Dutch version too πŸ™‚πŸ’œ xxx

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    1. Thank you so much for your kind words dear Dwight. I’m very grateful I knew her and wish I’d been old enough to understand her history when she was alive. She had the kindest soul and I can still feel the connection we shared πŸ’œ

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